AMh Linicus said:
Much better. You really are making excellent progress. I'm not just saying that, i swear it to you. =)
I posted this in my original post, but i edited that one, changed it up a bit and i'm going to repost it.
Feel free to start a whole new design using this concept.
Try to remember your rule-of-thirds though.
The rule of thirds states than an image is most pleasing when its subjects or regions are composed along imaginary lines which divide the image into thirds — both vertically and horizontally
from thephotoletariat said:
The Rule of Thirds works so well because it places subject matter in random areas around the frame and keeps it away from areas that normally indicate order by the brain’s pattern recognition software. You don’t always have to use the rule per se, but by keeping subjects out of the center, you inherently create more dynamic images.
You want for your focal to be as close to one of these blue circles as possibly. Sometimes you can get away with images in the center, but for the most part, try to follow this rule.