The render is in the center of the sig and makes it awkward to place the text....I'd move the render over a little bit and try not to dull out the whole image in just one color....I do like like some of the dark sigs you have done keep up the good work
The render edges are what stick out most to me in that, all the pieces go well together, and aside from placement of the render and text I thought the first one was pretty good. I'd say work on blending in the edges of your renders more so they look like part of the image instead of sticking out at the very front. I'm not familiar enough with GIMP to be able to give you details on how to accomplish, but anything from smudging, to some light bluring or even using other C4D renders to blend can make the image look more cohesive.
Another easy way to blend your render is to duplicate the render, and use a guassious blur effect on the bottom render. Than put it on screen or multiply. Both can look good.
ok thanks. ill give that a try here soon
The render edges are what stick out most to me in that, all the pieces go well together, and aside from placement of the render and text I thought the first one was pretty good. I'd say work on blending in the edges of your renders more so they look like part of the image instead of sticking out at the very front. I'm not familiar enough with GIMP to be able to give you details on how to accomplish, but anything from smudging, to some light bluring or even using other C4D renders to blend can make the image look more cohesive.
Another easy way to blend your render is to duplicate the render, and use a guassious blur effect on the bottom render. Than put it on screen or multiply. Both can look good.
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