The colors seem to clash in the last one, and it looks a bit crowded to me. Also it might help to copy and blend some of the C4D in front of the render you're using to give the image some depth and bring the whole thing together.
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Ok I personally liked the blue/white to red effect but i see what your saying. ill try to see what colors i can shift things too. and bunny what is it about the image that makes it crowded.
I just felt like there's a lot going on in a small amount of space, generally if I'm doing something smaller like an avatar, especially on a forum like this where it's 150 x 150, I'll only use a portion of the render so I'm not shrinking it down and cramping the image with all that detail.
ok thank you for the feed back. i thought about picking a portion of the render but i couldnt find a decent section. altho looking at your current signiture with the titan that gave the idea that i could break it up into two and apply it that way.
i was able to make a few color blending changes to the image and broke it into two parts each at 500x200 and lined them up using the same setup bunny has on his. i may take this idea into account to make a multi image using up more than one sig (if thats allowed).
not all of these are signitures. some of these are stuff iv done for just friends computer backgrounds
It's looking good for now, but only use the test images and keep your work to the sizes we use. This way we can better gauge what you're doing and what your skill level is. Also I would suggest trying more than just color effects on images. Use your effects gallery, layer masks, ect.
alright will do. once the next stow competition is up ill post the one i did for that
Ok so i took this render form the test thread and thought about bringing in a more rustic look wile creating a more defined light point behind him using diffrent layers and layer masks.
i would say try to create more depth between the character and the zombies. also make the gun flash larger, but blend it more at the same time. it really becomes the focal point because there isnt much depth right now
OK thanks for the feed back. i switched out the muzzel flash for a render that i found and did a few layer masks so it faded around the edge as well as duplicated the background and darkened one and added layer masks to highlight certain areas.
I like it overall, but the muzzle flash is definitely too small, and the red in the flash makes it almost look like that's a laser pistol or something.
i had this edited version that was supposed to go in with the quote for nugget but i guess i missed pasting in the link for it to show. but here is the edited one i have.
The depth is better, but the muzzle flash needs work. The light shining on your renders hand and face are red, meaning your light should be red. You'll also have to put red on the zombies.
ill switch the red out for a more yellow tint. the red was from a a light source that's not included in the render i do believe so ill see what i can do. and any tips you can give me on the muzzle flash since this is the first time iv tried one.
Soft light with a bit of layer masking with a smoke stock over it might look pretty good. Dropp the opacity too.
