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Message: <blockquote data-quote="XGC Radioactive" data-source="post: 537173" data-attributes="member: 46152">here are the issues I'm having with this one-Colors- You've got a render with almost no colors at all, and are using very strong color elements in the background. It makes the focal look like it doesn't fit. You'd almost be better off sticking with one color, or keeping it black and white.Blending- the focal has very harsh lines that separate it from the rest of the image. Try taking a blur tool and lightly tracing the outside of his arm and face, just to soften it up a bit and make it look more natural.Rules of third- You did very well on focal placement, good job! but the text kinda ignores the restText- I like what you tried, but in this instance, it does not go with the flow of the sig. Had you had a render or focal that had a harsh diagonal flow, it would work, but this render gives more of a horizontal one. The way you did it, it's very difficult to read, which may pose a problem to some requesters. It's their tag on the site, and it's meant to display the information they want. I'd simplify it and move it closer to the focal, making it smaller as well.I don't see variation in your fonts. Visit <a href="http://www.dafont.com" target="_blank">www.dafont.com</a> for thousands of free fonts!examples of black and white, or monotone:<img src="http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p117/McMurry2010/week80_zps3fcebe09.png" alt="" class="fr-fic fr-dii fr-draggable " style="" /><img src="http://i126.photobucket.com/albums/p117/McMurry2010/synmclovin_zps23f4abe2.png" alt="" class="fr-fic fr-dii fr-draggable " style="" /></blockquote>

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