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WRITING A BOOK, THIS IS MY PROLOGUE. PLEASE READ IT AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!
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<blockquote data-quote="XGC RVxxMARINE" data-source="post: 461204" data-attributes="member: 65452"><p>Ideas and imagination are always fun to put down on paper. Writing, however, requires skill sets that includes using proper English. You asked for input so...In your opening paragraph you write "me and my wife", should state that"my wife and I came to America". You might be trying to write in their language, but problems keep coming in that the reader does not get that feeling.</p><p>There are writing classes at almost every community college. You obviously have a talent for telling a story, so get help in understanding how to write it on paper!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="XGC RVxxMARINE, post: 461204, member: 65452"] Ideas and imagination are always fun to put down on paper. Writing, however, requires skill sets that includes using proper English. You asked for input so...In your opening paragraph you write "me and my wife", should state that"my wife and I came to America". You might be trying to write in their language, but problems keep coming in that the reader does not get that feeling. There are writing classes at almost every community college. You obviously have a talent for telling a story, so get help in understanding how to write it on paper! [/QUOTE]
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WRITING A BOOK, THIS IS MY PROLOGUE. PLEASE READ IT AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!
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